Osama
World rejoice your end
Obama
Skinned you out
Drowned your ego under sea
Your sins floats like scum
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Monday, May 02, 2011
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Thank U for this award
It feels good to be appreciated
wow lovely and playful words.
ReplyDeletewell done.
A++
welcome and have fun.
fantastic! to drowning of egos! :)
ReplyDeleteOsama, Obama rhymes and syllabically so close :)
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Thank you so much! :))
ReplyDeleteNice :)
ReplyDeletekeep it up, your awesome!
Thank you so much! :))
ReplyDeleteYour sins float like scum-
ReplyDeleteI love that.
very cool indeed...
ReplyDeletemy post was here
http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/05/01/poem-flexed/