Monday, May 02, 2011

Osama

Osama
World rejoice your end
Obama
Skinned you out
Drowned your ego under sea
Your sins floats like scum

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Form - Shadorma:


line one has three syllable
line two has five syllables
line three has three syllables
line four has three syllables
line five has seven syllables
line six has five syllables

8 comments:

  1. wow lovely and playful words.
    well done.

    A++

    welcome and have fun.

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  2. fantastic! to drowning of egos! :)

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  3. Osama, Obama rhymes and syllabically so close :)
    Nice shardoma, enjoy the potluck!!!

    :) Here is mine:

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  4. Thank you so much! :))

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  5. Nice :)

    keep it up, your awesome!

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  6. Thank you so much! :))

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  7. Your sins float like scum-
    I love that.

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  8. very cool indeed...

    my post was here

    http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/05/01/poem-flexed/

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