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If I were a baby againI would crawl to a nearest IT home
The tricks of net, having learnt in womb
Would know the paths to a twitter zone
Would surf the net for branded sets
And shop for diapers on my own
Of pinks and greens or blues and
Browns, scented with perfumed rose
Would chat with babies of other world
Share cuddles, airs, coos, and burps
With fingers tracing on a screen
Would exchange messages of our love
Would form a group of baby gang
To stop the rhymes of silly tones
Who cares what Ba Ba Blacksheep sang
Would hum film tunes into our phones
So glad would I be in that infant mode
In fantasy world of fairies and gnome
Eat virtual meals and ice-cream cones
Playing games sans smashing all our bones
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Wow ! You want to start em young huh ? learnt IT in the womb :-)
ReplyDeleteBest line is "And shop for diapers on my own" ..
Hehehe...hilarious and amazing! My first visit to your blog and started off with a wonderful post! It brings very vivid visuals...you write really, really well!
ReplyDeleteHey nice poem, trying to do all the adult stuff as a baby!!
ReplyDeleteAll the best
Not a wishful thinking actually we may have a day soon when babies will know about IT from their mother's womb .... a very nice poem...
ReplyDeleteEven I thought of tackling the topic with a verse, but thank god, I didn't do it; it would surely be no match for this one...LOVELY :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Madhu, Psych babbler, Rajalaksmi, Dmanji..
ReplyDeleteappreciate it much..glad u liked my poem
:)
Thank You Debosmita....sooo glad u liked it...although would have loved to read ur version too....i m sure it would be good...:)
ReplyDeletei am amazed at how beautifully you wrote down the lines
ReplyDelete..diaper thing is he best
good lcuk
Absolutely FANTASTIC. In fact, even I wanted to compose an "inane" 4-line stanza for my post but could not think through even a line of rhyme.... :-) It's not an easy art to master, I see....
ReplyDeleteBest of luck for Blog-a-Ton...
Thank you sooooooo much Chetan and talking skull.....I enjoyed writing it too...
ReplyDelete:)
hi
ReplyDeletea tech-savvy post on child nuances....
beautifully crafted.....
liked it :)
cheers,
mahesh
Thank you Mahesh..glad u liked it :)
ReplyDeletePushpee
Hi pushpee!
ReplyDeleteThis is my first time here and am a fellow blog a tonic :)
I really really loved it...
""With fingers tracing on a screen
Would exchange messages of our love""
Wow, creativity is at its own heights!! Good luck to you!
Shruti
too good, loved it. You have written it very well. couldn't control myself from reading it again :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shruti and Harsha.....soooo glad to know that my work is appreciated.... :)
ReplyDeletePushpee
Splendid!
ReplyDeleteI wonder how people find rhyming words.. :D It's still a mystery to me. :P
I loved the poem. Tech-savvy baby!! :D
Very well written! All the best! :-)
Hey that was such a sweet poem :)
ReplyDelete"The tricks of net, having learnt in womb
Would know the paths to a twitter zone" haha :) liked it
lollzzzz
ReplyDeletefunny ....!!
Keep Smiling!!
Thank You Karthik..Rhyming just comes..I dunno how .. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Evanescenthought...glad u liked it.. :)
Makk..nice to see u smile... :)
thank you for reading and appreciating..!!
Very nice poem. I wonder how you find such beautiful words to express yourself!
ReplyDeleteThanks Neeraj....Me wondering too....they (words) just dropped in.... :)
ReplyDeleteIt looks as if a child written this poem. very nice. I would recommend to replace Ba ba black sheep kind of boring rhymes with something innovative like urs. All the best.
ReplyDeleteu r right Bharathi..it is the child in me who wrote it...
ReplyDeletebecause Ba Ba Blackshep rhyme is boring that is why bolly tunes are preferred...
Thank you so much :)
Lol...The diaper line took the cake.
ReplyDeleteConsidering the speed with which time has undersized the globe, the poem is apt, speaks for itself of a generation raring to go...
very well-written. I am lousy with rhyme...you really shine on this one :)
Hugs
Sandy
Thank you soooooo much Sandy..ur post was wonderful too.... :)
ReplyDeleteIT kids .. would love to see that
ReplyDeleteA baby born in the silicon valley good one..
ReplyDeleteNoveen and scratchyour soul...
ReplyDeleteIT kids may be found in Bangalore...perhaps?? ..thanks for visiting my blog...:)
ah a poem finally :D :) makes me feel home again...
ReplyDeleteWould form a group of baby gang
To stop the rhymes of silly tones
Who cares what Ba Ba Blacksheep sang
Would hum film tunes into our phones my favorite yaay...nice nice post :D
Hey I somehow missed your entry..glad I caught it now..This is simply hilarious love it :)
ReplyDeleteFrozenwell, Daisy blue...Thank you soooo much....glad u like it :))
ReplyDeleteNot sure why my comment is missing here. i had visited your post before and found your post one of the better posts on the topic.
ReplyDeleteI agree. Today's babies are so tech savvy!
Thank you Prashant....
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Lovely poem thr pushpa.. thr have been sum othr poetic entries too bt this one did the maximm justice to the topic.. Really luvd ur tak on the Babies 2.0 :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Vipul...ur theme was good n inspiring..and I have never recieved so many commment on one post ever...thanks to u....
ReplyDelete:)))
being a whiz kid at a very early age and shop for diapers good one
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