# 6
Suniti writes:
"O your eyes! O your Eyes!!
Like twin stars in the skies.
They make a storm
in my bosom arise!!
Lo! Behold !! they are
Peeping at me,
from a cloud of curls,
they slowly unfurl,
Pushing me towards
an early demise
Your eyes!!"
Reply to Suniti.....
Why do you ode to starry eyes
And compare it to twin stars in skies?
There are million stars shining up there
But in your bosom they cannot… All lies
They cannot peep from cloud of curls
Nor have I seen them slowly unfurl
Because stars, unlike eyes, cannot shine all day
They are visible only at night
Godawful Poetry Fortnight
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