Thursday, March 29, 2007

Did you Like it?

go for a read meet,
take a seat, read my piece, wait for a clap or a pat on my back,or just a slap,
but get none.
only a glance, a rude turned up brow, a wrinkle on your nose or a faint smile,
but no sound at all!
Come on guys! You like my read?
Does this remind you of a bee that danced with glee when burned by a hot coal?
Is this like our big blue boys who are back by air without a goal?
Hey man!
yes or no?,
or else
go back to write some more that pleases your ears and mine.
This piece
you want I can fold it and dump it back in to my bag
and then
come back,
next time,
one more?
Can I?
Speak up man!
Can't you hear me?

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