Sunday, May 08, 2011

The sea

The child within us
lives with us forever and
it rejoices every moment,
be it storm
or a calm sea,
it continues to explore
the vastness of the waves.

10 comments:

  1. Beautifully written and expressed.
    "The child within us
    lives with us forever and
    it rejoices every moment, "

    Exactly! :-)

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  2. Thank you so much :)

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  3. Loved reading it, so truly expressed about the child present within each of us. Radhika

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  4. Thank you Radhika :))

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  5. Very well said Pushpee!
    I loved it absolutely.. realistic n true.

    Thank you for visiting me and leaving such a lovely note.. Many Hugs xox

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  6. Simple and well said!

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  7. Thank u Olivia and Foxy :)

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  8. Wonderful!! And it is up to us to keep this child alive... for it is this child that'll help us live!

    A beautiful piece of poetry, my dear...

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  9. Check out our short story slam today,

    We love creativity, your input is valued.

    Cheers.
    Happy Friday!
    Hope to see you in!

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